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Title: Start of Something Good
Series: Make a Brand New End
Fandom: Star Wars
Author: Batsutousai
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Qui-Gon Lives, time travel, jedi families, canonical character death, we stan Mace Windu in this house, the clones deserved better, Jango deserved better, character with PTSD, the Kaminoans are the worst, mentions of child experimentation, Force-sensitive clones
Summary: When Feemor warned the Council that a jedi had died, he couldn't have known what they would uncover. (Even if he kind of had.)

A/N: I'm trying very hard to avoid any ships in this series save for Kei/everyone, but that's mostly one-sided and just his personality, because the entire point was focussing on lineage feels and making everything better for everyone except Palpafucker, because fuck his wrinkly face anyway; how long do I have to wait before I have Feemor 'accidentally' defenestrate him?, but I admit that I also stumbled across a few Jango/Mace fics partway through last chapter and it was an honest struggle to resist the urge to just shove their faces together. (Look, friends, I am an unapologetic shipper to my core, and this fandom is just rife with dumb boys who could stand for a bit of buggering.)
So, you know, if you're seeing shippy moments, it's not intentional, but *fist bump because we're clearly in the same boat*

Uhm, I rushed writing this chapter, a bit, because I wanted the fic done in time to give it a reread before starting to post for Mace Appreciation Day. Hopefully I've caught any glaring errors, but if you see something that's made you go 'what the fuck's Bats trying to say here?' please do point it out and I'll fix it the next time I'm at my comp. So long as, you know, you're not a dick about it.

Mando'a, once again, has both hover text and translations in the end note.

Cross-posted to Archive of Our Own and LiveJournal.

Chapter Three: Oh But I'm Starting to Believe )

Make a Brand New End series:

Start of Something Good chapters:
1- I Know It's Gonna Take Some Time || 2- I'm Gonna Say What I Need to Say
3- Oh But I'm Starting to Believe

Next: Now I Fly

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Title: Start of Something Good
Series: Make a Brand New End
Fandom: Star Wars
Author: Batsutousai
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Qui-Gon Lives, time travel, jedi families, canonical character death, we stan Mace Windu in this house, the clones deserved better, Jango deserved better, character with PTSD, the Kaminoans are the worst, mentions of child experimentation, Force-sensitive clones
Summary: When Feemor warned the Council that a jedi had died, he couldn't have known what they would uncover. (Even if he kind of had.)

A/N: I read—well, listened to, tbh—Shatterpoint between finishing the last chapter and starting this one, so if Mace's characterisation seems at all different, that's probably why.
I'm slowly working my way through the prequels era books, now I'm back at my hell-job and have 6-9hrs a night I'm on my feet with my hands busy. That said, I've been warned off the books by Karen Traviss, so while I may borrow some things from those, as gleaned via the wiki, I'm mostly making up the early days of the clone project as I please. XD

There is some minor Mando'a use in this chapter. Most (if not all?) of it should be pretty self-evident, but I've put in hover text, and I'll throw in a translation bit at the end of the chapter, for those on mobile or who otherwise can't see the hover text.

Cross-posted to Archive of Our Own and LiveJournal.

Chapter Two: I'm Gonna Say What I Need to Say )

Make a Brand New End series:

Start of Something Good chapters:
1- I Know It's Gonna Take Some Time || 2- I'm Gonna Say What I Need to Say
3- Oh But I'm Starting to Believe

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batsutousai: (Default)

Title: Start of Something Good
Series: Make a Brand New End
Fandom: Star Wars
Author: Batsutousai
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Qui-Gon Lives, time travel, jedi families, canonical character death, we stan Mace Windu in this house, the clones deserved better, Jango deserved better, character with PTSD, the Kaminoans are the worst, mentions of child experimentation, Force-sensitive clones
Summary: When Feemor warned the Council that a jedi had died, he couldn't have known what they would uncover. (Even if he kind of had.)

A/N: Go on, ask me how long I debated how to go about bringing the clones into this AU.

So, it's not really clear how much most jedi know about the origins of the clones, because everything we know the jedi know, actually is learnt by members of the Council or Anakin. Given they fall pretty much immediately into the war, I went with the assumption that not every jedi knows everything. So, for Feemor's part, he knew they were created on Kamino, he probably knows who the template was, and he can do the maths to figure out this is about the time they were ordered. But who did the ordering and the chances that Dooku might have stuck his nose in? Yeah, not so much.

The timeline is a little wonky here, I think. Uhm, according to The Clone Wars, Sifo-Dyas was on a mission from Valorum when he was killed, but general consensus I'm seeing otherwise has Dooku not leaving the Order (and, therefore, starting his Fall) until after Qui-Gon's death on Naboo. *handwaves everything* Bear with me, I guess?

One last note, promise: Because Feemor is very much Coruscant-bound for the foreseeable future, it seemed silly to write from his PoV, so I'm picking on Mace this time. Which, related, posting the first chapter for Mace Windu Appreciation Day.

This fic is completed at three chapters and will update every other day. If you prefer to read a fic all at once, come back on the 27th.

Cross-posted to Archive of Our Own and LiveJournal.

Chapter One: I Know It's Gonna Take Some Time )

Make a Brand New End series:

Previous: Where You're Gonna Find Yourself

Start of Something Good chapters:
1- I Know It's Gonna Take Some Time || 2- I'm Gonna Say What I Need to Say
3- Oh But I'm Starting to Believe

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