Date: 8/11/08 14:40 (UTC)
batsutousai: (interventionofhigherpower)
From: [personal profile] batsutousai
Eh. It doesn't really have to make complete sense yet. Well, it does, but I only really need to get stuff down. (Ignore those plotholes and various impossibilities. XD)

I am trying my best to not make her sound like a Mary-Sue. The original concept didn't have any gods, but then I realized that a world this backwater would require some sort of belief in higher powers, and what better way to introduce her to those 'higher powers' then have them be the reason she's there. ^.^"

Lonán, at this point, is more riding on the fact that they were destined to meet because his Goddess wanted them to. He kinda figured that they'll travel together as far as the capital, then leave her at the gate. Next chapter, she proves herself a bit more interesting and certainly more useful to their cause. (And, yeah, she distracts Finlay really well, 'cause Finlay's an idiot. *cackles madly*)

I never mind your long comments, dear. They always make me think just that little more about what I'm writing. (And give me an idea about things that I should put in the story... ^.^")

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