Just read all that is posted on your journal. I like your Tom/Voldemort. I suppose I like most characters if they care for Harry & protect him from Dumbledore's manipulations. Typing that, did Dumbledore put the Order members up to assaulting Remus & burning his house? That could be another piece if you were to continue this story.
The knife through the eye! That came as a shock while reading. Thank whatever deity for the "bad guys" who rescue & care for Harry. As always I like your Severus Snape character, you do write him so well. I enjoyed reading what there is of this story. Hope that you may come back to it sometime. Thankyou.