ext_103026 ([identity profile] jamafanta.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] batsutousai 2009-02-04 04:04 am (UTC)

Gorgeous chapter. I love this! I'm not so concerned about the timeline; you've explained everything quite well in the story.

You've been very realistic and believable with your conflicts between light & dark, especially the little details like Lucius' disbelief about the muggleborns. I'm really enjoying this.

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