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I'm really getting to like this story. I wasn't to sure about the summary. "A girl getting sucked into her own story" ... sounds impossible and boringly Mary Sue-ish. But I know I can expect better from you :-)
It still requires a good helping of 'suspension of disbelief' to get my head around Radha's intervention, in particular the part where she knows and cares about people writing about her world, but I do understand the reasoning, somewhat. And the story is proving to be quite good, and very amusing.
I'm curious about how you're going to get Lonan to let Elspeth come along on their mission. Maybe he figures a girl might help distract the dunce from his mission? If she doesn't get them in trouble first, that is.
Looking forward to the rest of this, (I do hope you don't mind the big comment)
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I'm really getting to like this story. I wasn't to sure about the summary. "A girl getting sucked into her own story" ... sounds impossible and boringly Mary Sue-ish. But I know I can expect better from you :-)
It still requires a good helping of 'suspension of disbelief' to get my head around Radha's intervention, in particular the part where she knows and cares about people writing about her world, but I do understand the reasoning, somewhat. And the story is proving to be quite good, and very amusing.
I'm curious about how you're going to get Lonan to let Elspeth come along on their mission. Maybe he figures a girl might help distract the dunce from his mission? If she doesn't get them in trouble first, that is.
Looking forward to the rest of this, (I do hope you don't mind the big comment)
cloe